Patrick I Spy

 Walt read on when i come to an unknown word and think what makes sense?

Patrick reading

 Walt Understand the tense of words by changing their ending

Patrick writing

As a class we have discussed some possible words and similes to describe what has happened so far in the video.

1. Write a descriptive paragraph paragraph of what has happened so far in the video. Write it from the point of view of the boy.

Start your paragraph here.

I wake up the school was messy the papers and rubbish on the ground and rips on the wall .The school was messed up as a pig sty.because the storm came to messed up in the school .The teacher was looking at the boy.The

teacher was calling the police and the boy started to run away from the

police. When I got home I went pass the tv.then i saw the tv on 6 live in news.I saw somebody try to get inside the house.I try to get out of house but the door was looked i use my powers

to get me back the keys.Then the FBI came inside the house i ran to the woods.I saw the police

coming to try to rest me.Then i use my powers to through all the leaves at the police

then they try to call for more backup. And i still had to use my powers to take them out. After

that I keep running away from the police.They didn’t find me yet.Everybody was looking

for me.I keep hiding from the police.

Patrick Writing a Narrative 2

Every picture tells a story. Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about this photo.

T	Title - What is the title of your story
O	Orientation - Sets the scene with who, what, where, when.  Captures the reader’s interest.
P	Problem - What problem or issue disrupts normal life and needs a response from the character(s).
S	Solution  - How is the problem solved or attempted to be solved.

Use the following table to plan your writing.

T	laughing jack
O	laughing jack the killer and the family and the brother leo.
W	laughing jack killed his family and his brother when he was sleeping
S	the police got him walking at night .

there was a boy named Jack who live in the woods  he was in the cag and he was going to get out of the cag then the dad wasn’t looking after the cag with laughing jack inside. the guy call the

police. When the police came the police call for backups to cheek around the house to look for the cag. they we looking for the cag.

they almost found it. Laughing jack was going back to the cag

in the house then the police got him walking at night they took him in the jail. Then he escape. The police gard saw  laughing

jack running away from the police. The police was chasing

laughing jack.He was headed to the dark forest then the police

follow laughing jack in the dark forest. When they went in

the dark forest  they got lost in dark forest.They saw a House

they went inside  the house to look for laughing jack.Laughing

jack wasn't in the house they keep looking out for laughing

jack.Once they found the laughing jack he jump on him

with the knife to kill the police.They all got killed by

laughing jack. Laughing jack saw jeff . They

had a knife battle. once they died at the same time.they took

them to the doc they got very angry.They away run

away.The police keep follow the laughing jack.Jeff the killer

say go to sleep to laughing jack And laughing jack say I

am going to kill you jeff the killer.laughing jack was going

to jump on jeff the killer neck to stab jeff the killer then jeff

the killer was dead.the end